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Thursday, April 11, 2013

NA PO WRI MO, DAY 11: GREEN FOG

Green Fog

Green fog comes
on little frog feet

It sits on our cars
and in our lungs
until a cleansing rain
washes it away.

3 comments:

Kevin Kim said...

My friends and I
Would like to know
Just how the rain
Can cleanse our lungs

But out of fear
And politesse
The question stays
On tips of tongues

Elisson said...

Can rain indeed
Clean out your lungs?
The answer comes
on clumsy feet:

Unless you drown,
No, likely not.
The question is
Not indiscreet.

og said...

Humidity is the secret here
A cleansing influence- but I fear
the hacking up of pollen filled phlegm
would be most impolite here, ma'am.

So Eli's son you need to work
a little harder at this craft
While E.E.Cummings was a dork
And most still think of him as daft
You have great chops so why not show'em
Expectorate a minute poem.