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Thursday, April 11, 2013

NA PO WRI MO, DAY 11: GREEN FOG

Green Fog

Green fog comes
on little frog feet

It sits on our cars
and in our lungs
until a cleansing rain
washes it away.

Posted by Elisson at 10:42 AM
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3 comments:

Kevin Kim said...

My friends and I
Would like to know
Just how the rain
Can cleanse our lungs

But out of fear
And politesse
The question stays
On tips of tongues

April 11, 2013 at 11:34 AM
Elisson said...

Can rain indeed
Clean out your lungs?
The answer comes
on clumsy feet:

Unless you drown,
No, likely not.
The question is
Not indiscreet.

April 11, 2013 at 3:34 PM
og said...

Humidity is the secret here
A cleansing influence- but I fear
the hacking up of pollen filled phlegm
would be most impolite here, ma'am.

So Eli's son you need to work
a little harder at this craft
While E.E.Cummings was a dork
And most still think of him as daft
You have great chops so why not show'em
Expectorate a minute poem.

April 11, 2013 at 11:14 PM

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